End of pain


Cheerful morning, cold and breezy
making my day happy and cheesy.
I walked out loading my bags
and hands carrying sweets for god.
I walked against that breeze,
waiving off my hair
and bringing the ecstasy of fresh buds of mango tree.
Soon this blissful ride encountered an eclipse,
when a few bee surrounded me
and entered my hair.
With my hands I knocked them down.
I felt helpless in a matter of seconds
when they gathered and attacked me,
from all around.
All my hopes & plans came to an end.
I rushed, throwing away the bag and sweet,
over the lane.
I ran like a helpless poor- wretched.
My mouth felt salty and dry.
I ran with all my effort,
continuously, blowing them endlessly.
With last hope to elope,
I threw my shirts away
and ran as far as i can go…
I informed my friends and love;
her heart cried feeling my grief.
My friends rushed to me
and at that time they were like god to me.
My soul cried as I felt the pain,
when I removed those stinks and wasp,
pierced everywhere i could see.
Experience was bitter than a nightmare.
I rushed to doctor- afraid and nervous.
He treated me and brought back my conscious.
I went out the hospital happy and less worries.
I’LL SAY THANKS TO MY FRIENDS. MY LOVE , SHE CONTINUOUSLY MOTIVATED ME
AND HELP ME FIND A DOCTOR, EARLY MORNING.
I WILL ALSO THANK THE DOCTOR WHO SAVED MY LIFE AND BRING ME RELIEF
FROM THAT GRIEF.
🙂

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12 Responses to End of pain

  1. One can picture out the scene from your words. Its a bad experience but will be a memorable one.

  2. I remember as a child I had been stung similarly by bees and lived to tell the tale.It was during a school trip to a monument and someone had hit a hive with a stone. What followed was mayhem….

    What has been your learning from the incident?

    Shakti

  3. poetinside says:

    Thanks for sharing your childhood experience Shakti.
    From my incident I learn that its better to lay down on the ground where ever we are. Bees generally don’t go down to ground level. Anyways I’ve learnt that I can’t run faster than them. So this is possibly a better option.

  4. poetinside says:

    Thank you Kamlesh for your words. Yes ofcourse its a bitter experience of my life; unforgettable. And thanks for being there with me.

  5. Ashish & NIsha says:

    By reading thru lines I could feel the pain you suffered. I do hope you will be dng good soon. Thanks to your friends and all who helped you any way! Nice way to express your feeling even in pain.

  6. Ashish says:

    God bless you. Hope you will be dng good soon. Nice way to express your feeling even if you were in pain. Good Dude!!!

  7. Ruby says:

    Oh this is amazing! Love it!

  8. You are very talented and your pen is quite emotional. Love your work.

    Thanks for your kind words on my WordPress feature.

    Best,
    K.

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